Beksinski's Stone Head I can see where you were going with this, and there are certainly parts I enjoyed. I think the use of strings is nicely done...
However, the yikes for me is just the overall theme and tone of the track. It listens like the OST from an episode of Mr Bean and the Ancient Pyramid. The brass isn't used very well, there's a lot going wrong with the instrumentation IMHO.
Keep it up though, it's not the worst entry here! I'd like to hear more from you in the future. Thanks for putting this together